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Old 13th June 2001, 17:58
maddog_mcclaymore
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i have been asked 2 post in the literature forum so here goes:-

love!
old but brand new
between me and you
you are my every thought
every thing i do is for you
when i am with you
you bring me alive
all i have to do
is be there for you
you do not judge
when i get things wrong
but are very quick 2 lift me
when i am down
you are my best friend
but much more than that
you know what i am thinking
before i do it or even before i say it
you have no outwardly desires
apart from me
and you make things perfect
whenever you are near
why are you so good
why do i miss you when you are gone
why is love so great but also so painful
love
william scott mccafferty
not exactly robert burns
but from the heart
who let maddog out!
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Old 13th June 2001, 20:18
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Talking hi maddog

your poem's great,
just wish i was able to somehow get my feelings on to paper - and make sense!!

karasu and kathyv have written some excellent poems too, if you've loads of free time have a read through the my favourite poem's thread.

keep smilin'

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Old 13th June 2001, 20:21
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Smile

Lovely. Absolutely lovely.
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Old 13th June 2001, 23:20
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Maddog, come and join us in the poem thread...

Anneli
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Old 14th June 2001, 06:00
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Very nice maddog, did you write this for someone special?
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Old 14th June 2001, 13:50
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no
just how i feel
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Old 20th June 2001, 09:30
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Really beautiful, even Burns would not have written it better.
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