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Old 26th October 2008, 18:45
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]°sans poupée lombard pour l`environnement central°




Raging in this beautiful world,delusions of omnipotence and shady social impertinence.
One evening I met a wayfarer: dragged on his face contract off the features of individuals transcendental.
Of illusion survivability of a thousand souls.
At the foot,footwear consunte of endless paths,coming and going of attempted conquest of their stay, where to build a free existence.
Listening to his bitter words, he dreamed wash rooms, places can be visited easily,with minimum sums obtained interests, hypermarkets car on which sit the first round.
He hung his tunic with a multi-banner of a wall:the invisible hand,laughter of expensive glasses, that drunk the omnipotence of a party with friends, clothes walkway that inflate the bellies satisfied,ceremonies of convenience to access the world of consumerism on the high board.
From our direction,wet residence permit,to be eaten in the basements little easier, reverence due to moral,not sweat losing privileges.
Thrift purchases daily, not to intrude into bills too expensive.
Privation necessary,not to cheer heaps hung up the shaft entrance - which detects the life magagne underweight –
It was an interesting speech, his, a matter of points of support intermittently,to come to terms with the rise in price concessions from banks,the high mortality of distant needy countries, technological chaos and smiles steel to ensure the dominance and why not? - the mind control the crowd ignorant.
The landscape from television screens,or the camera of an alleyway,from the steps of a stadium ululante,or a dilapidated suburbs,the friction of contradictions economic malaise released nauseating:This is the burden of his sad eyes.
This, the loss of its rudder attached to the wire of illusions, which made her face varied slave of mediocrity, abyss next to behead the dreams, rising from the slums of the steep wall, and consolidated with the food of the common weaknesses and uncertainties of action.
The would have said that it does not agree to these glossy front ruins, the sense of the journey required a firm direction, that the choice of the drift could not be dictated by the cunning little resignation, the envy of the upper floors would only have led to a spiral of improvement, with no interpretation.
Seated,facing each other, eyes in his thousand eyes,my thoughts on his dry lips, became a sequence of tax collections...




Qui font rage dans ce beau monde, des délires de toute-puissance et ombragé sociale impertinence.
Un soir,j'ai rencontré un pèlerin: traîné sur son visage hors contrat les caractéristiques de l'individu conscient
De l'illusion de survie à un mille âmes
Au pied,les chaussures consunte sans fin de sentiers,allées et venues de tentative de conquête de leur séjour,où la construction d'une existence libre.
L'écoute de ses paroles amères,il rêvait de chambres parfaits, lieux à visiter confortablement possible,avec un minimum de sommes obtenues intérêts,aux hypermarchés,qui siègent sur le premier tour.
Il a suspendu sa tunique avec un multi-bannière d'un mur:la main invisible,le rire des lunettes de onéreux, que la toute-puissance ivre d'une partie avec des amis,des vêtements passerelle que gonfler le ventre satisfait,les cérémonies de la commodité d'accès au monde de la consommation sur le haut bord.
De notre direction,humide permis de séjour,à être consommé dans les sous-sols peut plus facile,la vénération due à la morale, de ne pas perdre les privilèges de sueur.
- Privation de besoin,de ne pas encourager des tas accrochés à l'entrée vain la vie qui détecte les circostance insuffisante pondérale -
Il s'agit d'un discours intéressant, leur question de points d'appui par intermittence, de faire face à l'augmentation des prix des concessions de la part des banques,
la mortalité élevée des pays lointains nécessiteux,de chaos et de sourires en acier pour assurer la domination et pourquoi pas? - contrôle mentale ignorant de la foule.
Le paysage de la télévision, l'appareil photo ou d'une ruelle,des marches d'un stade hurlantes, ou d'un état de délabrement des banlieues,
les freinage des contradictions économiques publié malaise nauséabonde: Ceci est la charge de ses yeux tristes.
Cela,la perte de son gouvernail attaché au fil d'illusions,qui fait face à ses diverses dell'indolenza esclave,
abîme à côté de décapiter les rêves, passant de les bidonvilles de la forte mur, et consolidée avec la nourriture de la commune faiblesses et les incertitudes de l'action.La aurait dit que ce n'est pas d'accord avec ces ruines brillant devant, le sens du voyage exige une direction ferme,que le choix de la dérive ne pouvait pas être dictée par la ruse peu de démission,
l'envie de les étages supérieurs ne ont conduit à une spirale de mieux, sans aucune fraude derrière.Assis, face à face, les yeux dans ses mille yeux, mes réflexions sur ses lèvres minces, est devenue une formule d'impôt de collections...



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Old 26th October 2008, 18:46
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This is an intro (Laboratory theater) taken from a draft text does not yet outgoing ...(... We are being defined for a first print publishing, whether underground.Even if I have to redefine lasciviousness sine disease,
fragmentation as a "cyber-punk", written in a hermeneutics - classicist,if nothing else able to reach a wide audience of women ... say versatile ...


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Old 26th October 2008, 18:59
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I am sorry for our little understandable English ...

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Might it not be a good idea to go and write on an Francophone message board instead?
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Might it not be a good idea to go and write on an Francophone message board instead?

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alkemistsvart, I have removed your post within this forum that was also posted in the Poetry Corner forum. You should know that multiple postings are considered spam and will be removed. As you seem to be posting borderline spam I suggest you carefully regard where your posts should go and place them once.
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Scottish Poetry - the worlds finest? Old, new, borrowed - not blue! In here

There is no way that what you have typed can be classed as Scottish and I am not sure it is what
I would call poetry !!!



Did you not see my post in Poem's to you... here is the part that you didn't take notice of !!!!!!!

I am going to take out all the links and if you decide to put them back or
even post more I will take further action !!!


You disregarded this and kathyv had to delete another link...there will be no more allowances
made for your lack understanding of English...

Post again in the same vein and we will have to think about your membership here !!!
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