......We Regret To Inform You

[Thanatos]

Where'd everybody go? Is nyone reading this?

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[joshua_y]

I am not a poetry expert but...

The poem is very provocative, but the use of

anaphora makes me somewhat bored.

Improvement may come from extending the

lengths of your lines.

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Joshua

[Thanatos]

You just don't like my poetry, do you?
Actually, poetry is not my forte. I send more time on novel writing, not poetry. My poetry is just things that pop into my head, with rare editing done.

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[Ki_2]

Well Than, it's a really emotional poem, and a big touchy subject. People might not talk about it because it may hurt them to remember those times, but aye, the poem is really good, and I could sense that you put lots of feelings into it.

Cheerio
YvY

[Thanatos]

Thanx.

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