My Love

May I never lose my vision
from gazing upon you

May I never lose my hearing
for I would miss your lilting voice

May I never lose your touch
for you are my comfort

May I never lose your heart
for you are my life to me

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Gaol, Dilseachd, Cairdeas

[celticjack]

Mhaithu, Becca, mo chroi -- well-done!

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celticjack
Ar do slainte!

[sapphire]

wow .... nice poem Becca.... very very well done.. do you have any others?

Sapphire

[monzon]

That was lovely Becca,thanx for sharing it.
guille

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greetings earthling!

[arie]

Becca,
Very beautiful. Where did you get it? I would love to hear more like that.

Ree

[james_christie]

Very nice becca, I liked that a lot!

here is one of mine:-

you run around inside my head
take me, I'm yours - until I'm dead
loving you is easy, you know what I mean
inside I'm happy, joyous and clean
you constantly teach me new things
yes, listen! that's my heart - it sings
you make my life so complete
it's nice, isn't it sweet?

[Thanatos]

We're in tears, Becca!!! That was so sweet.

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Thanatos//:{