desperate ?

[Andrew_Marriott]

It's not that I'm desperate
I'm simply impatient
I'll admit that I want it
Not sure if I need it
And is what's coming later, better
Than what's possible for now ?
Those doors which always seem fixed shut
would be great if they had windows.

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[Andrew_Marriott]

are there no replies because no-one's read this, or because it's not very good and you're too polite to say ?

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[jinmich]

Andrew
I read it but if I need to reply poetically I'm not ready to

I think all poetry is good

It's a form of expression and any form of expression is VERY VERY VERY GOOD




Janet

[Andrew_Marriott]

poetical replies are not neccessary, just say what you think of each individual piece. THe same goes for my other stuff (cloudgazing, the storm, )

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[jinmich]

Where's "The Storm" Andrew, It sounds interesting

I've always believed that if it's going to be this cold it needs to be a blizzard

and if it's going to rain it might as well storm -

So you see I'm interested in "The Storm" I must have missed it some where

Janet

[Andrew_Marriott]

It's further down, but I'lll add an extra message to it so that it stays near the top

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