Cherished Moments

[e_cost]

Here is yet another poem I still have to work up the guts to give to my girlfriend. Any thoughts?

Who else fills my head this way?
Remembering moments of magic
Delayed nights of rest
First kisses
Moonlight on water
Deep blue eyes
Smiles lit like candles
I miss her
Our time apart has been short
But our time together...priceless
These memories - unique...irreplacable
This fire that's started is only truly shared
...when she is in my arms
My symhony of life renewed with passion
From moments that can be told to others
but can only be shared...cherished...
with her

Give it to her!!! I've never had anyone write me a poem. Even if things changed, she would always have this poem to look back on and smile.

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Gaol, Dilseachd, Cairdeas

[Andrew_Marriott]

I agree
Give her these gems.

Even if they do have spelling mistakes (symphony)
<teasing>

from the man who doesn't let anyone he knows really well see his deepest peotry

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More Irn Bru !!!!

[ScottishLass]

Yes give her the poem, she'll love it no matter what.

I'm casting a "chanting spell," GIVE IT TO HER!!!

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Gaol, Dilseachd, Cairdeas

[Mj]

Must be a lucky girl to have words like that written about her.......give it to her....

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Mj