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Old 20th December 1999, 06:14
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Ok everyone, this is a cheesy love poem I wrote for my girlfriend, but she hasn't seen it, and never will. =]

Angel
I see the moonlit sky, and I see her eyes
Their warmth, their compassion, the love that's help within
Her words reach me from far away, and I realize...
...I realize the joy, the joy that's possible
The joy she gives me, and what I want to give her
Is this all a dream? This whirlwind of pleasure...
...that begins for me that night on the moonlit shore followed with me lying next to her
Sliding my hand along her back
Feeling the softness of her cheek
Caressing her hands with my own
...magic...all of it
How can I be this lucky?
She shows me things I'd long since forgotten
She sparks my flame, gives me confidence
I sit by this dim light and wonder
With all she's given me, what can I give her?
This angel...
...the one who sees the best in me,
and gives me hope for happiness
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Old 21st December 1999, 14:02
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Mature cheddar if ever there was.
Nice though.

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Old 21st December 1999, 22:18
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And just why won't you let her see it? <tsk, tsk>

Andrew, you should be taking notes on this poetry stuff.

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Old 21st December 1999, 22:42
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Becca, check out the 3 I've just posted.

Do I still need lessons ?

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