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Old 13th December 1999, 16:24
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Here I post an older poem I wrote once for my girl. I do not know if it is of any interest to thee, and it is just roughly translated.

My dearest love;
my hearts desire.
My sweetest dove,
my heartīs on fire.

Thou art my love, thou art my life,
thine looks, thine eyes, thine smell,
makes me wanting thee to tell
that I want thee to be my wife.

From now to all eternity
I will be always loving thee.
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Old 13th December 1999, 16:56
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(*sigh*) Oh, Anon, thou hast a way with words!!! - Diane
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Old 13th December 1999, 16:59
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you old crooner you.

watch him when he starts to croon
He makes all the ladies swoon
Hos poetry contains such beauty,
The ladies think him such a cutie
And though it might make wimmen flush
I just think it's soppy mush

(not really, but I wanted to have a funny ending)

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Old 13th December 1999, 18:19
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Maranatha, Andrew! (*smile*) -Diane

Anon loves with all his heart
A woman should feel blessed
To receive a love as deep as that
Can you teach it to the rest?!


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Old 14th December 1999, 11:52
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The skill with words which Anon has
Is what makes him unique.
If you tried to get guys copying him
I think that they'd all freak
For no man thinks another man
can teach him about wooing
Evry man is blinkered, says
he "knows just what he's doing"

Maranatha, Diane ? "The Lord comes" ?

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