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Old 9th November 1999, 00:02
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STARING GIRL

I once knew a girl,
Who would just stand there and stare,
At anyone or anything
She seemed not to care

She’d stare at the ground

She’s stare at the sky

She’d stare at you for hours, and
You’d never know why

But after winning the local staring contest

She gave her eyes a well deserved rest.
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Old 2nd December 1999, 03:58
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cute.

Did you mean "she'd" instead of She's, in line 6 of your poem?
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