Original Poem

When the moon is full
and the dragon's breath swirls
You come

Palms and lips touching
You cross the breath of time
To be by my side

For when the sun rises
Our time is done
Until the dragon's breath swirls
Once More

[irish_highlander]

thta's great-there is nothing wrong with it. poems sometimes tell a person about their inner self. u must be a litle into mysticism/occult anything in that nature, a generous/loving heart, and an occasional romantic

Oh, <blush, blush> I'll give you one "free" tarot reading. Thank you Matt.

[TopTotty]

Becca - why have I got to be careful! You've confused me. Top Totty

Well Topper, I didn't write that for Matt. I asked him to critique my poem since it's been well over 20 years since I've written one.
I told him I would try to write one, fitting his personality, but it might take me another 20 years!

[alpin]

*cheers* becca, you did well.