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Old 23rd November 1999, 15:51
TopTotty TopTotty is offline
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"Lee"

I still think about you every day,
And I wish you hadn't gone away,
I would have coped if you had been here,
I wouldn't have cried so many a tear.

Did you really have to go?
Why am I feeling so low?
Do you see me where you are?
Where are you? Is it far?

There'll never be anyone like you,
My heart knows that too.
Life went on after that day,
But my love for you will always stay.

I want you to greet me when I come,
Lets reunite and have some fun,
Like we used to,
Me and you.

Wait for me, I won't be long,
I can hear you now, singing our song.
I'll be there,
You know I care.

L.
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Old 23rd November 1999, 15:54
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You made it mate.

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Old 23rd November 1999, 18:48
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Aw, that's so sad. <sniff, sniff> They don't deserve ya. Like your name, um TopTotty, gotta be kinda careful though. See ya around.
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Old 24th November 1999, 10:13
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Lise,

I am mailing you but you don't seem to be getting them!!

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Old 25th November 1999, 03:24
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Well ain't I dumb. Topper I responded to what you said to me under my poem. Now that I re-read what I wrote above, I see where the confusion is. I meant you gotta be careful spelling your name, "TopTotty." I'm afraid I might misspell it and say "Top.....," well you know, that part of the upper female anatomy. Ah, my mind was in the gutter again. Sorry. That's why I'm playing it safe and calling you Topper.
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Old 2nd December 1999, 02:54
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