Poem #2

[Mcneely11]

Take with you my love, sweet love, for the moment we met was a lifetime of joy
Till this day forward as a spiral through time our hearts will be forever linked
My days are fullfilled, my bounty overfloweth like a waterfall of tranquility
Forever in my arms you shall be always my love, always my partner, always my friend.

Take with you my love, sweet love, tenderness awe inspiring, sweetness to the touch
The child in your heart always unmeasuring, always without selfishness, always full of kindness
Your touch , so full, so precious to me, never in my days to come will I ever deserve such a love as this, for I am thankful to this day of my blessing.

[eve1102]

this one is really nice julie.

eve

[ScottishLassie2]

Julie, I loved your poem. Although I know nothing about writing poetry, I like to read it. Where did you get your inspiration? Hope you keep writing.

Bravo!

[Mcneely11]

Hi all! my inspiration is my husband who has been gone to Texas for 8 weeks on training. He'll be back this Saturday, Yippee! - Julie

That's wonderful. May you never lose your inspiration that is shown through your words. When it's gone, it's hard to find a way back.

[This message has been edited by Becca (edited 29 October 1999).]

[ScottishLassie2]

Hi Julie! Your husband is your inspiration, that's so romantic! Congrats on your husbands return. Talk to ya later.