Poem #1

[Mcneely11]

To feel my loneliness run so deep
It is my heart that bleeds for you
like a rose thorn that pricks my finger
to watch the dewey droplet of crimson like sweet nector fill the void in my life
As I am without you, your but a spirit that enters my dreams as I lay my head to slumber
waiting, dreaming, till the day that your in my arms again
no more tears shall I cry for my empty heart
and my loneliness will run no more.
-Julie*

[eve1102]

good peom julie.
eve

Very good. Keep writing.