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Old 14th July 2002, 04:50
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Remembering-

Remembering that cold December day when your hand touched my face.
Remembering the love in your eyes when we walked down the street.
Remembering when you grabed my hand so I would'nt get lost.
Remembering when you took care of me when I was sick.
Remembering cooking Christmas Dinner just for the two of us.
Remembering those cold nights when you would wrap your arms around me to keep me warm.
Remembering the feel of your lips as they touch mine.
Remembering the love we've shared, the touching of bodies,the touching of souls.
Remembering the day when I had to leave your side, Oh how I cried...

I will Always Remember My Lov Till The Day I Can No More...



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Old 14th July 2002, 04:56
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Does He See Me...

-Does He See Me-

Does he see me, when no other else does
Am I just another member
Does he see my heart is true
Am I just another love sick puppy
Does he see me, when his eyes are closed
but what does all this mean
could I have feelings for him
and just don't know it
Does he see me, or am I not there
does he think I'm dumb because I'm not smart like him
Does he see me, when I'm online
Does he even care
Is his love for his past love still there
does he see me, or am I not there
Does he even care.



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Old 16th July 2002, 17:01
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hey Lass, go on, give us some more! I like your poems!
The second you posted, is this announcing another sweet Scotland.com romance? What's up here, all the folks falling in love...

Anyway, your poems are fine and I would be interested in reading more!

Cheerio and a big hug!
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Old 16th July 2002, 17:12
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Ireland My Home!!!

Ireland,Ireland, Oh Ireland
Land of my heart, my soul, and my dreams.
Ireland where the sky is so blue and the green hills so green
Ireland why can't this be
I long for my home land
Oh Ireland please take me home
to the place where I dream....
Land of my heart beats so true...
Dearest Ireland I've found my passion and it lives with you
Today I've found a six leaf clover...
Oh Ireland is it true.


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Old 16th July 2002, 17:14
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Re: Ireland My Home!!!

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Ireland,Ireland, Oh Ireland
Land of my heart, my soul, and my dreams.
Ireland where the sky is so blue and the green hills so green
Ireland why can't this be
I long for my home land
Oh Ireland please take me home
to the place where I dream....
Land of my heart beats so true...
Dearest Ireland I've found my passion and it lives with you
Today I've found a six leaf clover...
Oh Ireland is it true.


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Yeah, you're a talented person! I bow to you, Lass! Wish I could write like you!
I wrote some pathetic stuff under "my turn" here in the forum. Can't match with your style! Sorry for answering so late...
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Old 16th July 2002, 17:18
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I know its about Ireland but...

I will soon be writting about Scotland...soon to come.
everyone has talent even you ....it will come to you give it time..and I Thank You from My Heart....
You have made my gloomy day Much Much Brighter...TY.
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Old 16th July 2002, 18:07
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Re: I know its about Ireland but...

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I will soon be writting about Scotland...soon to come.
everyone has talent even you ....it will come to you give it time..and I Thank You from My Heart....
You have made my gloomy day Much Much Brighter...TY.
Aaaaw! Gloomy day? What has happened? Hope tomorrow will be brighter. Big hug!!!

What I meant is that I write a bit old-fashioned. Not fitting the century... Have a look and you know what I mean... I have written about Scotland. In a sad, pathetic, old-fashioned way. I'm a bit crazy, I think!
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