Please could you correct my grammar?

[matharìribh]

Cha b´urrainn dhuinn an diugh eòlach air an àicheadh, a bha cho beò fhathast san dùthaich againn sna laithean ud. Tha cuimhne agam fhathast air an latha nuair a bha mi a toiseachadh ag ionnsachadh Gàidhlig airson an àm ciad. Bha e bliadhnan air ais agus sguir mi luath. Bha robh misneachadh gu leòr orm timcheall ann ri gam brosnachadh ga faicinn à mach bho mo shùilean Gall. Mar gàth troimh mo chridhe a bha ann an uair sin.

If youre a Gaelic writer, could you please check the above for mistakes ?thankyou.

[matharìribh]

I should have written "cha robh" instead of bha robh. Just noticed this above.

[Steaphan]

Cha b´urrainn dhuinn an-diugh a bhith eòlach air an àicheadh, a bha cho beò fhathast san dùthaich againn sna laithean ud. Tha cuimhne agam fhathast air an latha a bha mi a' tòiseachadh air Gàidhlig ionnsachadh airson a' chiad uair. Bha e bliadhna air ais agus sguir mi gu luath. Cha robh misneachd gu leòr timcheall orm airson mo bhrosnachadh gus faicinn a-mach bho mo shùilean Gallda. Is ann a bha e mar ghath troimh mo chridhe an uair sin.

Not sure what the you meant with the first sentence, so highlighted it in bold. The first clause of it doesn't make much sense to me, but the second clause starting "a bha cho beò" seems fine. I've corrected the rest though.