Orinocoflow, I loved this poem. Here you have a man describing his undying love for a woman, who does not see how much he has to offer her.
I know this has nothing to do with poetry but, I'm going to ask anyway. Where are you from? I live in Atalnta, Ga. I'm 16, hope you don't mind. I can't write poetry, I can read it however.
I loved this poem, talk to you later.